Here's the distilled wisdom of several dozen emerging writers, who over the years wrote MANY published novels!
Guidelines for Critiquing
Sometimes we can’t see what’s best in our own work, so when we edit, we may muck up the good as we try to eliminate the clunky. As critiquers, we want to help each other learn to recognize our
best sentences,
best usage of language,
dialogue that rings true,
can’t-stop-now hooks,
etc.
Here are a few ground rules.
1. Be positive.
2. Use friendly, considerate language.
- “Have you thought about…”
- “Maybe you could…”
3. Be clear and specific.
- “This sentence is long. I’m having trouble following it.”
- “You’ve started two sentences in a row with gerunds here.”
4. Be encouraging.
- “I love the way you do dialogue.”
- “I can see this character so clearly.”
5. Contribute from your own experience.
- “When I was trying to fix up a paragraph last week, it helped when…”
6. Mark technical problems (spelling, typos, punctuation, etc) on the manuscript but don’t bring them up for discussion unless there’s some obscure error the whole group might learn from.
Most Important of All!
7. As the receiver, don’t take suggestions too seriously. It’s your writing!
I hope these guidelines are helpful. Similar lists have helped create a mutually supportive (cheerleader) and still substantively solid (editor) atmosphere for critiquing.
Has your experience with critique groups been positive, negative, or mixed? Do you participate in a critique group with other writers? What are your guidelines? Please join the conversation in the comments!
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- The Creative Penn (Joanne's fantastic post this morning inspired me to dig up these guidelines.)
- Caffeine's not a crime (I discovered Jane Isaac's wonderful blog this morning from a Twitter retweet.)
- Seumas Gallacher (Founder of TBSU and always a beacon of authenticity!)
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ReplyDeletemwwaaaaaaaaaah back at you, Seumas! Thanks for visiting! Huge hug (physical manifestation of mwaaaah??),
DeleteCarole
Very similar to the way things are run in Toastmasters. When evaluating people, we try to use all these techniques to make sure the critiques actually provide useful information to the speaker, but at the same time supporting and encouraging all their efforts. And that last point is also crucial... always go with your gut even if some of the feedback you've received says otherwise. ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Nathalie!
DeleteI hadn't thought of it that way, but these guidelines would work for just about any group discussion, especially related to performance. Hmmm...
No wonder you enjoy Toastmasters so much! Keep having fun! Hug,
Carole
Hi nice reading your bllog
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