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The book cover for my erotic romance novel, Twelve Nights!A #SexyFun Story
Twelve Nights was super fun to write. After publishing a few of what I felt were character driven erotic romance novels, I decided to beef up my plotting skills. And who's a better plotter than William Shakespeare?! Twelve Nights updates the plot of Twelfth Night, one of my favorite Shakespeare comedies, adding in all the raunchy sex that Shakespeare no doubt would have included were he writing today! If you've never seen or read the play, don't worry, the novel stands on its own. If you love the play, the story is just that much more fun.Here's the promo
Mix stunning identical female twins with a lonely half-billionaire and his lawyer. Shake well. This rollicking, bawdy coast-to-cost serving of sex and mayhem will make you laugh out loud even as you moan with delight. The ultimate in hot, #SexyFun!So what do you think? The cover and blurb aren't set in stone yet, since the book isn't officially released on Amazon. Any feedback/ideas will be gratefully received. Be sure to leave me a comment if you'd like a free Kindle review copy. I'm as always looking forward to corresponding with you!
Hugs,
Carole
Hi Carole. A couple of suggestions. On your blurb, it's all good except that if you're trying to say they look stunning with the line "stunningly identical female twins", you're not. You're saying that the fact they're identical is stunning. You might want to go with "stunning identical twin girls" or something.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm sorry but the cover screams "self-published". Check out the covers of the top 10 erotic novels on Amazon and then aim for the same style. I'm a firm believer in spending money on a cover so you rise above the pack.
I wouldn't say any of this if you hadn't asked for feedback. Please don't hate me!
All fixed, Cassandra, and thank you so much for your honest feedback!
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Carole
Thanks Cassandra! Of course, I don't hate you! This is exactly the kind of feedback I'm looking for. I appreciate your visit and comments!
ReplyDeleteCarole
Hi Carole. Fonzy here. Here's my email address: fonzyroy87@gmail.com
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Fonzy
Thanks Fonzy! I'll put you on the list, and as soon as it's ready to download, I'll send you an email.
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Carole
Hi Carol, I would also love a free kindle review copy! My email address is newbeginnings1124@Gmail.com. Oh,and this is Kim. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat Kim! I've put your name in the contacts list and as soon as it's ready, I'll let you know. Do you have Dropbox? If not, it's a free download. It's the service I use to distribute review copies.
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Carole